Sunday, October 30, 2011

Final Project Blog

    For the final project I've decided to complete option one and I choose Flannery O'Conner for an author.  I choose option one instead of two because I'm interested in trying to make connections of similarities between some of her short stories.  I enjoy reading short stories and I've never read any of her work before.  So it'll be interesting to see her style of writing.  The primary text I have chosen to use is called, "Everything That Rises Must Converge."  
    In my final project I hope to be able to complete the assignment with great success.  The project is a little intimidating right now but I will just take it one step at a time and do the best I can.  I hope to transition between paragraphs well and find all the sources I need to make this a great essay.   I mostly plan on using the college library link and the internet as secondary sources and find sites where critics have commented on her stories.




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Sunday, October 23, 2011

Blog #9 Letter

Dear Ms. Cline,
     This is my third semester straight of taking an English class and lets just say it's been quite the challenge thus far.  It started off a bit rough for me trying to find the time to complete my assignments but it's been much better lately and honestly this is by far the best English class I've taken out of the three.
     So far I'm most proud of my 2nd essay that I wrote on analyzing poetry.    Not only was that a challenging assignment but it was very interesting.  Although my grade did not improve much from my rough draft to the final draft, I feel that I had found the deeper meaning in the poem that I had missed before.  It was my first experience with dark poetry and it was one of the best and most meaningful poems I've read.
    In the other two English classes I have taken in college there has been witting assignments.  Nothing like analyzing poetry though.  The best part about writing a paper about analyzing poetry is every reader takes the meaning of the poem differently.  So there really is no real answer but how it affects the reader.
   For the remainder of this class I hope to improve my writing skills greatly and pass this class with an "A" because I know I can.  I feel that you are a great instructor and really care what your students are learning and how we are progressing.  It is also really nice that you are there to answer questions and direction with assignments.
     Sincerely,
     Lindsey Blakley

Friday, October 14, 2011

Creation Essay Draft #3

Lindsey Blakley         
Laura Cline
English 102
11 October 2011
Creation 
            “Frankenstein,” written by Mary Shelley, was a great novel of its time.  There were many different themes present on the surface of this great tale but the underlying objective was much stronger and gave the novel its great success.  Femininity played a key part in a non direct way in this novel.  During a time where femininity was present but not acknowledged all to often, Mary Shelley produced a novel that was written to invoke her readers with fear; with an idea that is both impossible and turns out to be a catastrophe for two characters in the book by producing the un-natural idea of a man creating life and struggle with motherhood itself.
            Mary Shelley life was all too often filled with sadness and death.  Her mother dying shortly after the birth of Mary was a very well known feminist writer.  It is partly due to her that Mary incorporates the idea of femininity into her novel.  The theme is established early on by a main role character named Victor Frankenstein.  A young man intrigued by natural science decides he will do the impossible and give life to a human like creator.  The reader can quickly identify that Victor is succeeds in this task to reproduce an act that only a women can do and give birth, “I succeeded in discovering the cause of generation and life; nay, more, I became myself capable of bestowing animation upon lifeless matter.” (Shelley 30)  Victor’s excitement is quickly overtaken by disgust and fear as he realizes he has created a hideous monster.  This being the first example of Shelley stating that only women can fulfill such a duty that Victor has attempted to take on.
            Victor Frankenstein quickly rejects his creation as soon as it comes to life.  He finds his creator not what he had expected at all.  Previously expecting to feel accomplished and proud Victor finds himself sickened by the idea of what he has done.  Just minutes after the monsters animation Victor ran and states, “…catching and fearing each sound as if it were to announce the approach of the demoniacal corpse to which I had so miserably given life.” (Shelley 35)  One could compare Victor’s feelings and reaction to the same feelings a mother has soon after giving birth to an unwanted baby.  Quickly abandoning it and fleeing with fear of the question: what is next?  Men are not physically or mentally capable of giving birth to a child and therefore this situation can only result in failure as it is not natural.
            Ellen Mores, literary critic who is a most famous for being a feminist critic, wrote a modern criticism about the novel Frankenstein.  She as well feels that there are many examples of the use of femininity in this novel.  She states, “Here, I think, is where Mary Shelly’s book is most interesting, most powerful, and most feminine: in the motif of revulsion against newborn life, and the drama of guilt, dread, and flight surrounding birth and its consequence.”(Mores 218) I completely agree with Mores.  Mores writes about how Mary’s life can be compared to the novel with great similarities.  Obvious to any reader familiar with the novel and Mary’s life can agree with her when she says, “Here her intention to underline the birth myth in Frankenstein becomes most evident, quite apart from biographical evidence about its author.” (Mores 224)
            The monster continually addresses Victor Frankenstein as his creator and often speaks of feelings of anger and abandonment.  This represents the same sort of relationship that a mother and child have.  During the first real meeting between the two the monster says, “I learned from your papers that you were my father, my creator; to whom could I apply more fitness than to him who had given me life?” (Shelley 94)  Him addressing Victor in this way, as an actual parent that gave birth to him is a mockery of creation.  In Victors success in bring life to a lifeless object he has left a lonely unwanted thing that not even his creator can bare to look at.
            Barbara Johnson, who is an American literary critic, wrote a very interesting response to the novel Frankenstein.  Similar to Mores she too feels there is femininity present in the novel in terms of creation and life.  She states, “On the other hand, the story of Frankenstein is, after all, the story of a man who usurps the female role by physically giving birth to a child.” (Johnson 248)  Shelley gives Victor the ability to “give birth” to a living person, which in real life is completely unrealistic and impossible.  Johnson states, “…should have fictively transposed her own frustrated female pen envy into a tale of catastrophic male womb envy.” (Johnson 248)  This is an interesting interpretation of what is going on with Shelley.  She was at the time closely working on ghost stories with her husband Percy Shelley and other great writers.  Mary being surrounded with great writers always in her life, starting with her parents, made her a great writer.  Maybe she did feel feelings of being inadequate thought compared to the others and that was one of her reasons of giving a man abilities that only a women could fulfill.
            When Victor is faced with the proposition of creating another monster, a female companion for his monster, Victor agrees with the promise the Monster and his mate will never come around again.  Shelley once again gives Victor the ability to do the impossible.  But at the last moment Victor comes to the realization that this could potentially be another huge mistake that will haunt him forever.  This whole section can be compared with the idea of abortion.  Ending a life that doesn’t have a chance to exist which again is something that can only be done by women.  Indirectly it is as if Mary is pointing out all the very important roles that women play in the creation of mankind.
            Susan Winnett, who was also a literary critic that wrote a response to Frankenstein, supports the evidence of femininity in the novel. She states, “…his indulgence in the retrospective mode of “male” sense making keeps him form acknowledging his ongoing responsibility to the birth he clones as well as from seeing that hence forth his plot inevitably involves the consequence of an act of creation that he regards as a triumph in and of itself.” (Winnett 295)  She continues on to say that Victor has this idea backwards in a sense because with the production of life should stem something beautiful and life lasting, but does the opposite for Victor.  Just another example of what terrible events occur due to the unnatural “birth” by a man. 
            The night that Victor and Elizabeth wed represents a time of fear and anticipation for poor Victor.  He is haunted by the thoughts that his monster is near and has harsh intentions towards his newly found happiness.  With the monster killing Victors last true love, the monster wins this battle of monster vs. creator.  Victor created an innocent soul and through rejection and hatred turned him into a murder.  This particular situation represents the near completion of Victor creating life with Elizabeth just to have it ripped from his grasps by his obsession of to cheat Mother Nature and give life where he should not have toiled.
            In conclusion of the novel both characters are over come with hatred of one another.  Victor’s creation that began as a goal that consumed him to the very soul ended up consuming him and everyone he loved.  The other authors that were quoted from support my idea that the basis of this novel is circled around femininity and the idea of creation.  The idea that creation could be fulfilled by a man instead of women is an insane idea that Shelley purposes in this novel and to no surprise ends in disappoint and failure in both Victor and his Monster.
Works Cited
Shelley, Mary. Frankenstein. New York. W.W. Norton & Company, Inc. 1996. Print
Moers, Ellen. “Female Gothic: The Monster’s Mother.” New York Review of Books. Garden                          City: Doubleday, 1976. 214-44. Print.
Johnson, Barbara. “My Monster/Myself”: Diacritics 12.2 (1982): A Norton Critical Ed. New York, London: WW Norton & Company, 191. Print.
Winnett,Susan. “Coming Unstrung”: A Norton Critical Ed. New York, London: WW Norton & Company,
 
           

           

Sunday, October 9, 2011

Summary of a Critical Response Barbara Johnson

  I chose to write about Barbara Johnson's criticism of Frankenstein.  Barbara Johnson was a American literary critic and translator.  During her writing,"My Mother/Myself," she compares three different books, including Frankenstein, to motherhood and also tries to prove them as feminine autobiography's.  Barbara Johnson compares the relationships between Victor Frankenstein and the monster to that of a mother and her child.  She continues to say that Victors creation is that of an unwanted or abandoned baby of a mother. Knowing that Mary Shelley's mother died while giving birth to her and then Mary herself baring four children and only seeing one live past infancy is a strong point to her novel, Frankenstein, somewhat  resembling events of Mary's life. Johnson concluded her writing by stating, that even though Mary's novel had only strong male role's, the underlying message that men cannot create life without terrible consequences proves that her criticism that this novel could be compared to a feminine autobiography.
  After reading Frankenstein and then Barbara Johnson's literary criticism it allowed me to see the underlying theme in this story.  I didn't personally make the connection between the events of the novel and the events of Mary Shelley's life personally.  During the 1800's it was uncommon for a women to be such a successful writer especially in this type of novel so she had to be discrete about her feminine points as well.  I feel that this would be a good topic to write about since there are so many different topics to discuss that all revolve around the novel, it is for sure to be quiet interesting.


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Sunday, October 2, 2011

Reflections on Revisions

   When I begin to write a paper getting the first paragraph done is by far the most challenging part.  I try and keep the first paragraph as a generalization of what is to come, but of course trying to create a strong thesis that will allow me to build and branch the essay from there.  
   In high school I learned to write a rough draft and then correct that draft and then write a final draft.  My biggest problem with writing so many drafts is that I become very indecisive and sometimes have the tendency to re-write the entire thing will a whole different angle.  So I find it much easier, personally, to just get on the computer and type away.  No writing a rough draft and then typing it up just type the paper and go from there.  I love getting an opinion on what I've written and make changes as necessary.
   After receiving my draft for essay #2 back I need to revise quite a lot.  Mostly and wording and spelling of words.  What I plan to do is take all the comments from the teacher and off the blog and take a much closer look there first.  After all those are fixed I will re-read and add to or take away no useful material and just basically clean it up.  I will then allow someone else to read it and tell me their opinion about what I have written and take suggestion down on a piece of paper.  Last but not least I will re-read again and add the suggestions in where ever I feel and turn in the final piece and hope for the best!

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